Tuesday, January 16, 2007

Dark Princess-1

Dark Princess-1

I always thought, I am a sample, unique;
there’s no one in my league.
How I wished for a mate,
I had so much to crap to debate.

My views and ideas had a different tweak,
people thought, I am a freak.
So, I kept things personal….
diaries being my only arsenal.

Suddenly, I met this girl,
she was different, at superficial.
I barged into her personal profile,
even before my senses could compile.


All was written about her,
but I read what wasn’t there.
Her picture told me she is cool,
links, pointed she is beautiful.

Slowly I realized she is unique,
a girl belonging to my league.
Mind numb, heart made a go,
scrapped her, even before I get to know.

Reply told me she is willing to talk,
I knew a friendship is about to walk.
We became friends overnight,
also partner in weird stuff, all right.


We sat talking stuff like crack,
I lost all time track.
Her topics were seductive,
I realized she is addictive.

Now, I am addicted,
yet never regretted.
She is surely a girl to check,
I am waiting for her to be back.

People say she is mad,
I agree, this mad is my fad.
She is cute, hot and happening,
wish I could have now seen her blushing.


A smile just struck her lips,
look the way her hand flips.
Rolling her eyes, she is muttering “its good in excess”,
now, she wants it to end here, and I bow to the wishes of my Dark Princess.

15 comments:

Jigna Patel said...

awesome buds!!..nice one...

Unknown said...

dis is awesum..ur bst work so far :)

Aparna Vittal Dhas said...

Hmmm...

COOL!

But u know what I really cant help feeling this princess sounds far better than the rest in ur poem!

And, I still strongly suspect if anyone can belong to ur league!


But, A REALLY AMAZING POEM!

Baptized Fiend said...

ummmmm....... ohk... m here.. m jus sitin wid dis pg on.. i duno wt to write... cz dis poem z jus "WOW"... n wowz da best word icn thk f ryte nw... cz dis poemz jus ummmmmm... aarrgghh... "WOW"...

ok enuf f tareef.... teme y did u write d poem"s"??? :X u bad bad boi...

Baptized Fiend said...

ummmmm....... ohk... m here.. m jus sitin wid dis pg on.. i duno wt to write... cz dis poem z jus "WOW"... n wowz da best word icn thk f ryte nw... cz dis poemz jus ummmmmm... aarrgghh... "WOW"...

ok enuf f tareef.... teme y did u write d poem"s"??? :X u bad bad boi...

chetan keswani said...

this man till he was in his graduation never showed such imagination
as far as i know he was eighter freakin out wd frnz or completely engrossed in syl.books
GOD knows wat angel he has seen
ki
"KABHI KABHI INKE MAN MEI YEI KHAYAL AATA HAI"
whatever......... but this work calls for appriciation

Unknown said...

attitudes and emotion of the the two characters is very well expressed in this poem....

good work....awsome poem...

Sukalyan said...

wah wah

where will I get the girl:P

Even I liked her:D

Do not forget to give me link to her profile.

BTW..... how on earth can I manage to find so many rhymes:o

Varun said...

ohh suki

rhymin is coming from me.

rest fo ur questions *Ignored*

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Sukalyan said...

*red face*

Who is that girl?

*red face*

Varun said...

forget it suki


*smirk*

Unknown said...

good work dude... keep up the good work

Nithya Menon said...

Good Overflow of EMotions..........

Mr Snuffles said...
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Mr Snuffles said...

dang im making spellin' mistakes !

Good one dude .... !