Tuesday, June 19, 2007

LOVE ON TRAIN!!!

The Story starts in rain,

A guy and a gal rushing to catch their train.

Boy was cute, smart and handsome.

Drenched in rain yet looked awesome.


Moving swiftly he collided hard,

Zeroing on collision factor, his eyes popped like retard.

He was struck by a glimpse of sudden glowing beauty.

Also a pleasing, soothing fragrance that was a bit fruity.


Gal however was bothered about train,

Getting up, she ran as her head throbbed in pain.

She got to the compartment and took her berth.

A few minutes later, our boy walked on opposite berth.


Gal looked away thinking he is a mess.

What can one think, he was rain drenched and with dirt laden dress.

Slowly the boy realized it’s the same gal,

All his senses again went in curl.


However, a sense of chill brought him back,

Noticing his condition he moved out of the pack.

Meanwhile the girl thaught its good,

She took a novel from her bag of food.


Boy came back all dry and fresh,

His hair was dry and a night dress was flawless.

That’s when the girl noticed him,

Realized she was an idiotic whim.


The guy sat on the opposite birth,

Plugging iPod, he forced to keep his eyes on some mirth.

Failing to do so he shut them hard.

Few minutes later, he got his reward.


Gal nudged him with a hot cup of tea,

Opening his eyes a tray with tea and biscuits is what he see.

Reluctantly taking the cup he said thanxx

Gal noticing the reluctance, assured their ain’t any pranks.


Boy gave a grin and sipped eyeing the pretty face.

By the time finished, intro gave way and chattering took pace.

They sat whole night laughing and joking,

Even flirty sentences started rocking.


By the time journey ends,

They would become good friends.

Then I think they’ll get married.

I don’t know who they were or could be???

But Love on train will always be their to hear or see.

4 comments:

Sukalyan said...

Reminds me of me and my crush in a bus[:p]

Sukalyan said...

I think this will go up as one of the best!

Varun said...

abe teri crush list kitni lambi hai be[:o]

Aparna Vittal Dhas said...

Great piece... by far the best!

The acute description of the syndrome is what makes it beautiful I suppose!