Sunday, June 21, 2009

Suggest a title please.......

Trapped in the verses of life,
I search for those with happy rife.

Ripples of gloom surround,
with deafening sad sound,
yet I try and sniff you as a hound.

I search for thee,
'O happy verses of life.
Cleverly you dodge me,
stabbing my back with knife.

Pain and sorrow,
keep me bound.
But I know,
today or tomorrow,
I'll get you, for you are around.

7 comments:

Unknown said...

title should be

my happyness is fake :P


khade khade

Sukalyan said...

no, title should be "Finding Happiness"

...ritika.... said...

'for you are around'

Pari... said...

" In search of... "

beerboy said...

I'll get u, for u are around.


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Varun are you sending a sms to someone on Mobile?

if you think you are writing a poem, Never ever write in this kind of Shortcut language, You are really skilled with your words :) use it.

My suggested title is
"For your Love"

Beautiful work :)

Varun said...

Done sir... SMS lingo cleaned up [:d]

hindustani said...

nice poem :) chuhe :d copy kar leta hoon impress karne mein kaam aayegi :P