Life is tension,
love is further apprehension.
Such a waste of emotions,
and mess of feelings.
They tie me to people,
and bind to useless earthly affairs.
I wanna leave;
Stay alone somewhere;
May then I find peace;
Away from all this mayhem.
But this world binds me,
ties me, due to painful emotions and feelings,
due to love and cravings.
I wanna leave and live.
Live alone in the lands of green,
a peaceful place with nature’s reign.
14 comments:
let me live and die alone
Nice Dude !!! :-|
awesome!
Live n Let Live...........!
traumatized soul :P
Good!! But Love ain't so bad :x
You can get Peace and love both at the same time too...in fact only love can bring peace in your life!!
at the end of the day/life you will need some companion with you ;)
Life is tension,
Love is further apprehension.
Such a waste of emotions,
And mess of feelings.
They tie me to people,
And bind to earthly affairs.
I wanna leave,
Stay alone somewhere,
May then I find peace,
Away from all this mayhem.
}...
The above lines flow is awesome, there is a scope of developing it more by showing passion in words... i mean you gave the picture of life's and love's scenario according to your view, but why it is a waste of emotions, what you went through, how painful it was, not too many lines but too much deeper in thoughts...
But this world binds me,
can be "Lately"...or anything as per your view,
It's beautiful flow of words :)
Blogger ѕωαмι ηανєєη said...
traumatized soul :P :-But not a psycho :)
can U Guess?, who's a psych? :P
Live and let die !!!
And relaly living isnt really bad ;) cherish things u possess but done cry on bygones !! Let bygones be bygone !
If u can not have a happy ending atleast look for another happy beginning :P ;)
Go to Alaska
I loved it.... something like my own set of emotions right now! :)
bro just go for peace dont search for love coz peace z most imp n when u r in love u wont get peace!!!!!!!
so singledom z the best thing....njoi it!!!
It was cool! But, love is charming most of the times.
Beautiful poem.. keep up the good work..
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