Hell, follows the path I tread,
Gloom, I spread in each step.
An aura of sadness surrounds me.
Hopelessness is my entire being.
I am a walking misery,
and DESPAIR is me!!!
Desperation, I brood upon,
Grief is my only charm,
Pessimism my only friend,
and Oppression my bodyguard.
Prostration I create,
Forlornness I promote,
Despondency is my last resort,
and Sorrow is my way to go.
For, I am a walking misery,
and DESPAIR is me!!!
Happiness I search for,
a feeling of joy,
but Agony strikes back,
Desolating all the hopes and glee.
Depression now everywhere,
Melancholy, is only thing visible to me,
As, I resign to the fate,
that I am bound to suffer for eternity.
For, I am a walking misery,
and DESPAIR is me!!!
Gloom, I spread in each step.
An aura of sadness surrounds me.
Hopelessness is my entire being.
I am a walking misery,
and DESPAIR is me!!!
Desperation, I brood upon,
Grief is my only charm,
Pessimism my only friend,
and Oppression my bodyguard.
Prostration I create,
Forlornness I promote,
Despondency is my last resort,
and Sorrow is my way to go.
For, I am a walking misery,
and DESPAIR is me!!!
Happiness I search for,
a feeling of joy,
but Agony strikes back,
Desolating all the hopes and glee.
Depression now everywhere,
Melancholy, is only thing visible to me,
As, I resign to the fate,
that I am bound to suffer for eternity.
For, I am a walking misery,
and DESPAIR is me!!!
16 comments:
aur sad ho sakte thi kiya ye..:P
i liked it...but i guess it all just a part of life..and nothing is there forever..so keep look ahead...lots of love and hugss partner
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Seriously, I didn't understand it, probably I am thinking too much of getting under the shower now.
y is it so full of DESPAIR n sadness.. :-s mera net DC ho gaya apne aap as soon as i read it :O..however i felt the last para wud be something to do wid forgetting despair n coming out of it...
If they ask, "Who amongst u all knows all synonym of sad", u r the winner !!
Matlab hadd hai !! whatever happens is part of life and one shud live life such that even in weakest of all situations, u can raise ur head up high and smile !! This is not what is expected out of us ! We did not live all these years to see ourselves in such miserable condition :x
I DID NOT like the poem at all !!
hahahahahahahahhaha
as expected of u simmmiiiiii >:D<
always motivating[;)]
So u better get motivated and present us with an erotica :D which u were planning since so long :P
Lolzzz....
ok ok...
i will present u with erotica... for sure and soon enough too[:d]
kya nautanki hai ye ... this makes Shakespearean tragedy look charming and lively.
If it going to be gloomy one next time, make it subtle at least :( ...
that was an awesome one but dear bro there z no need to get sooooooooo upset njoi kar yaar ek hi toh life hai n dont worry i relly wish u'll get each n everythng u wish in life n u r an awesum poet......y dont u publish a book dude? frst copy main hi purchase karungi par jab tum mere liye koi poem likhoge!!!!!!!!
:)
And you said you are not sad :O
As a poem its fine but then Simran is right :P
varun is sad :O
but what is the reason
Oye...what happened yaar...Why a poem written in such gloomy taste? :-s...
Ummm...Poetically it was fabulous. But, this is not what I like from you. >:P
i liked it a lot...it is depicting the mood of dejection so easily and smoothly...good work
Nice! Like some sort of sadness you have it feels so..
Nice work! Carry on dude! >:D<
The poem doesn't involve, doesn't hold...It is just a group of words put together where every line means the same thing.
Now the good thing : nice choice of words !! Keep Writing :)
Varun... Poem is a work of pain most of the times which makes people go yaaa yaaa yaaawn... so give them a fuck!...
You write on...I love this one... Pain in love...heights of passion in love... well i suggest you to share your work with poetic standard people but not random bums who got no way to feel the words
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