My first attempt at writing song…
I know I suck…
Please bear along,
You can always comment, “what the fuck?”
Lolzzzzzzz
This is a song about a heart broken majnu.. whose laila dies and now this idiot commits suicide by jumping from a tall building while singing this..[:p]
Come home,
Come to me…
I miss you,
Life sucks without you…. -2
O Oaaooo…….
Pathetic I feel,
Trapped in this fate’s rotating wheel.
Come on…
O’ come back you,
Good times,
I want you to,
Come back to me,
Come back …
Come to home,
Come to me…
For I miss you…-2
Sorrows of this life,
I wonder….
Why am I still alive?
Without you life seems so miserable,
Pathetic and incorrigible.
Death is but more than welcome,
I shall seek you in heaven.
And then, I shall come to you.
O’ honey I miss you
O’ baby I miss you…
Just want to let you know,
All hopes and dreams died long ago.
It was the day I saw you go…
It was the day…. They took youuuuuu.
But why did you have to go?
Why did you just go??
Was I nothing to you?
Didn’t you love me too?
I just want to know…
So, comon’ O’ you,
Come back…
Come to home…
I miss you… -2
Come back to answer..
What all is unanswered,
And the things I seek to know.. -2
I am still down here,
Waiting for you in here.
Tears are draining…
My heart crying….
Becoz, I miss you…
O’ my love… I miss you..
Without you I am so lonely,
Eyes have dried maybe,
But heart is bleeding,
My heart…. Its still bleeding.
Dunno, why its still beating…
What purpose is remaining?
Why am I still alive?
When you are gone…
So far away….
That I cant reach you,
I cant again see you,
Sitting in a corner….
I cant just watch you..
You were everything that I wanted,
Only thing I demanded…
And the only one I needed.
Please come back,
Come to home…
For I miss you
Cant you see how much
I miss you…
Cant you feel the pain…
I have for you…
You are up above,
They say as a star you watch over me….
Over me???
Do you watch over me???
Maybe you cant see me,
You are so high above.
But I shall come to you,
If you don’t…
Come back..
Come home…
Come to meeeee….
For I miss you -2
Now I climbed all this.
For you to spot me…
See, I am here,
Waiting…
Longing…
Craving…
For you.. just for youuuuu.
O’ please just come back..
I miss you
Come home..
Come back, I miss you…
Come to meeee -2
With open arms I shall walk to…
You…
I miss you…
You didn’t come….
So, I come to you….
Leaving all the bonds behind,
Attractions and pleasures of this world fine…
I come to you….
For I miss you… -2
I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu….
~~~~Pause~~~
Here, I come back…
I have come to home…
Come to you…
Darling, I missed you….
O my love… I love you…
I Love youuuuuuu..............
5 comments:
Pathetic and incorrigible.
This line breaks the flow of an other wise good lyrics !!
I have thought of a tune ... it goes like
la la la la la la
:P,
You can write far better. You have the potential which is seen in other poems. Not upto the mark :P.
Still good one
Good effort .... still u can do better thn tht... :)
Keep it up !!
It's good to read you again. Your words always inspire
crying after a gal dumps you, SUCKS
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