One Night @ Hospital (A dream date come true)

Well originally this is a poem on a real event. However, i never thot of writing on this untill sukalyan gave me the same totally same theme as his dream date. Then i did realise the time i spent is actually a dream for loads... and was for me as well, untill luck made me live it. Hmm... at start i wanted to write a neutral one so that i may include everything as per sukis description, however after wasting almost 12 sheets of paper i started to write the real events. The feelings were just not their... the words did rhyme in all attepts but the read was empty....... no inner feelings. This one, the real one looked expressive and so is here.......


Kindly read and comment...... waiting for everyones comments:-

One night @ Hospital

[A Dream Date Come True]

One night when it rained,

Memories of which are quite unstained.

I can’t forget one moment of it.

A dream date, I must admit.

That night in a city newly established,

Population was sparse and people just vanished.

But this cute classmate was stuck,

Tending a sick friend, I know that did suck.

Somehow, I was forced into joining her,

Reluctantly I sat waiting for the dawn to appear.

Of all the things, my sleep was more important.

Hell! My dream girl shall be waiting by her tracking camp tent.

I never knew nor dreamt of this night to turn in a legend,

Where; I may go on to live a dream from start to end.

I sat their skulking inside,

With a fake smile plastered outside.

Hours passed away sitting in a boring room,

My cute classmate was shy as if I am her newly wed Groom.

That silence was giving me a boring death,

But her wish for coffee, brought new life on barren earth.

It was very late at night,

As both of us passed rooms, very quiet.

Hospital canteen was our stop,

But the sitting room had a lock.

Purchasing coffee we wandered to the lawn,

Sitting on grass, I noticed we are lone.

A deep breath, and I realized,

The beauty of night that left me enticed.

Smelling the wet mud in fresh air,

A cool breeze now and then, playing with my hair.

Raising my chin, I noticed the dark sky,

Dimly lit, by stars and moon, as black clouds fly.

Was it the beauty of night,

Or charm of breeze or moon light.

I don’t know, but both of us were now talking,

And where it may lead, none of us seemed to be caring.

I looked at her now and then,

Avoiding, a complete stare stance.

Ah! She was so pretty,

And nature seemed to compliment her beauty.

My eyes got frozen at the show,

Put up by dancing locks as breeze passes above, slow.

Bright eyes complimented those dark manes,

Like a night sky with two moons, arranged in a single plane.

I wanted to sit and watch her for eternity,

Wondering, is it just her or the magic of night’s beauty.

Last sip and coffee finished,

Staying out of that wretched room was my only wish.

Somehow God seemed to be listening,

And she asked if we can do some walking.

The sky was already drizzling lightly,

Cupids shedding love scents, seemed likely.

Getting attracted more and more,

I lost track of time chore.

Admiring her moves as she walk and speak,

I missed a pothole that gave a sudden tweak.

Balancing my staggering,

I found us in a clearing.

Closed shops all around,

Both of us drenched as heavy rain drops pelted the ground.

That is when I realized,

She was equally enticed.

As both of us were dripping wet,

And have walked for 2.5 Km. net.