Sunday, August 17, 2008

I miss you!!

My first attempt at writing song…
I know I suck…
Please bear along,
You can always comment, “what the fuck?”
Lolzzzzzzz
errr... i cant describe the tone i was singing it in..... why not u try ur own tones and tell me according to u which suits the best[:p]
This is a song about a heart broken majnu.. whose laila dies and now this idiot commits suicide by jumping from a tall building while singing this..[:p]
Come home,
Come to me…
I miss you,
Life sucks without you…. -2

O Oaaooo…….

Pathetic I feel,
Trapped in this fate’s rotating wheel.

Come on…
O’ come back you,
Good times,
I want you to,
Come back to me,
Come back …
Come to home,
Come to me…

For I miss you…-2

Sorrows of this life,
I wonder….
Why am I still alive?
Without you life seems so miserable,
Pathetic and incorrigible.
Death is but more than welcome,
I shall seek you in heaven.
And then, I shall come to you.

O’ honey I miss you
O’ baby I miss you…

Just want to let you know,
All hopes and dreams died long ago.
It was the day I saw you go…
It was the day…. They took youuuuuu.

But why did you have to go?
Why did you just go??
Was I nothing to you?
Didn’t you love me too?

I just want to know…
So, comon’ O’ you,
Come back…
Come to home…
I miss you… -2

Come back to answer..
What all is unanswered,
And the things I seek to know.. -2

I am still down here,
Waiting for you in here.
Tears are draining…
My heart crying….

Becoz, I miss you…
O’ my love… I miss you..

Without you I am so lonely,
Eyes have dried maybe,
But heart is bleeding,
My heart…. Its still bleeding.
Dunno, why its still beating…

What purpose is remaining?
Why am I still alive?
When you are gone…
So far away….

That I cant reach you,
I cant again see you,
Sitting in a corner….
I cant just watch you..

You were everything that I wanted,
Only thing I demanded…
And the only one I needed.

Please come back,
Come to home…
For I miss you
Cant you see how much
I miss you…
Cant you feel the pain…
I have for you…

You are up above,
They say as a star you watch over me….
Over me???
Do you watch over me???

Maybe you cant see me,
You are so high above.
But I shall come to you,
If you don’t…
Come back..
Come home…
Come to meeeee….

For I miss you -2

Now I climbed all this.
For you to spot me…
See, I am here,
Waiting…
Longing…
Craving…
For you.. just for youuuuu.

O’ please just come back..
I miss you
Come home..
Come back, I miss you…
Come to meeee -2

With open arms I shall walk to…
You…
I miss you…
You didn’t come….
So, I come to you….

Leaving all the bonds behind,
Attractions and pleasures of this world fine…
I come to you….

For I miss you… -2

I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu….

~~~~Pause~~~

Here, I come back…
I have come to home…
Come to you…

Darling, I missed you….
O my love… I love you…

I Love youuuuuuu..............

5 comments:

Sambitesh said...

Pathetic and incorrigible.

This line breaks the flow of an other wise good lyrics !!

I have thought of a tune ... it goes like

la la la la la la

:P,

My existence said...

You can write far better. You have the potential which is seen in other poems. Not upto the mark :P.

Still good one

Unknown said...

Good effort .... still u can do better thn tht... :)

Keep it up !!

Unknown said...

It's good to read you again. Your words always inspire

m said...

crying after a gal dumps you, SUCKS